[SJAAboard] Etiquette page

[Jim Van Nuland]

Akkana Peck wrote:
> 
> Okay, here's a stab at the etiquette page. It turned out the old
> etiquette page had a lot of stuff in it that wasn't etiquette,
> so I was able to make it a lot shorter as well as breaking it up
> with headers and simple rules.  Did I leave out anything important?
> http://shallowsky.com/sjaa/etiquette.html

  I would retain something on how to approach others, when asking for
help or when walking around.  Keep some part of approaching a
photographer who may or may not want to chat. These *are* etiquette.

  It reads well, your shortened sentences are good, and the headers are
a big help.  That page originated as general advice for going to a star
party, not strictly etiquette, and it's good to keep some of that. 

  The stuff on star-hopping, etc., is good material but out of place.   

Clearer Skies (and syntax)!
--
Jim Van Nuland, San Jose (California) Astronomical Association
<a href="http://www.svpal.org/~jvn/ ">JVN's web site</a>